The 21st century has begun. What
changes do you think this new century will bring?
Today is June 3, 2013. It has been more
than 13 years since the 21st century has begun. During the recent
hundred years, we humans have gone through numerous changes. People around the
world now became able to have comfortable lives with machines which help their
work, communicate in a much easier way, and have longer and better life by improvement
of medical technology. Just by looking at some of these factors, the 21st
century will definitely bring some big changes to people’s lives.
First
of all, daily technology has improved. Even in our parents’ generation, people
didn’t expect that all people would carry smart-phones around and carry light
laptops. However, now we can do countless things by just clicking or touching
the screen. Also, robots are invented every day to improve the quality of human
life by replacing human labor by these robots. These days, engineers are
working on inventing robots which exactly resembles human beings. In the near
future, these robots might replace the human beings and do all unnecessary works.
However, if this really happens, it also brings up some problems about the
rights of the robots. If the robots act and even have emotions just like real
humans, it is questionable whether we should treat them equally as humans or
not. Still, 21st century will definitely be an easier century for
the people to live due to daily technological improvement.
Moreover,
the scale of communication will be different. There is something called www,
world wide web. Through the world wide web, people can access to the
information that they want to find. If the technology improves even more, more
information will be provided and people will be able to get better information
more easily. Also, the SNS, social networking system allows people to
communicate. Through SNS, some people can find old friends. Also, it let people
to communicate easier by reducing time and effort at the same time. In 21st
century, life will be much more convenient through the internet and SNS in our
hands. If the technology allows us, people might communicate just through the
brain network, and send messages in a speed that o one has ever thought of. 21st
century will also be an stage of massive people communicating with each other.
Lastly,
people will be able to retain healthier and richer life due to the medical
technology. Polio once took numerous people’s lives away, and it was once a
disease which could hardly be cured. However, WHO declared the end of polio,
and this is due to the medical technology which have developed rapidly. With
this speed, it is very likely that terminal diseases such as cancer and aids
will be cured in the near future. Also, scientists are inventing new remedies
by studying human body. The expected lifelong span of our generation is about
120 years, and it is keep going to increase in the future. There are even some
companies who freeze the person immediately after the death, and if the
technology develops more in the future, these frozen bodies might revive again
and live eternally. In 21st century, people will be able to enjoy
longer and healthier life.
21st
century can be also seen as an era of technological development. If the
scientists keep working on forming the DNA structures and cloning, the movie
<Island> may come to reality. The earth may be crowded with people who
live for hundreds of years, and the third gender might even appear suddenly
into our society. However, we should always be aware of using the science technology
in an inappropriate way. In a few years, in a near 21st century, something great will definitely happen and
change our lives.







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답글삭제This is a complementary essay. Changes in all parts of society was dealt with. I like it.
답글삭제A standard TOEFL essay. I liked how you mentioned the negative consequences of technological development as well as the positive side of it. Keep up the good work!
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